The advice is to rewrite, and rewrite, and rewrite until you get it right. Here’s version #4 of the back of book blurb. What do you think?
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Honey has tracked conspiracy theories for seven years now – and something feels different this time.
She’s the girl with the extra identity, many voices, and the ability to see what others don’t. She sees from both perspectives and sometimes behind the veil.
When those who have the ears to hear confirm the world is on a precipice, Honey embarks on a cross-country mission at the strange promptings of the Magician. Her trip takes her around secret societies, intentional communities, and social media spies, and ends face to face with her long-lost love mystery.
And Honey must learn the answers to the questions: how do we deal with evil? What is fear? Can it be transformed? Because something has happened and the newly dead are earthbound. So why would a silver-haired spy and censorship maven be tailing her?
Twelve People can change the world. Enjoy the journey.
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